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  Act 1A Scene 0070 "Mole Hills"     Notes & Images  


EXT. SUBURBAN HILLSIDE PARK - DAY


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 CELINE 
We need to talk.


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 ERNEST 
We... um. What are we doing?


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 CELINE 
Listening to your existential angst make mountains out of mole hills followed by an orbital dynamics 101 class.


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 ERNEST 
I am a ramblin' man. Wait. Am I in trouble? What did I do? What do we need to talk about?


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 CELESTE 
Trouble?


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 CELINE 
No trouble. But you could work on your social skills more. After all, our family is about to get much bigger soon.


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 CELESTE 
What!?


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 ERNEST 
Ya, Grandma and Grandpa are coming soon. Stronger together and all that. It will be nice.

We're going to bring aquaponics to the whole neighbourhood. Farming fish and vegetables and herbs and fruit and...


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 CELINE 
Yes that too.


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 CELESTE 
Aquaponics is a fish farm?


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 ERNEST 
It's a whole system - for growing fish and plants.

But you said, "that too". And, "much bigger soon". Does that mean...?


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 CELINE 
So it turns out we're good for an adoption! We're going to have another child - or two.


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 CELESTE 
Brother or sister?


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 ERNEST 
That's terrific news! But two? Does this mean twins are a new option?


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 CELINE 
Nope. Not that I know of. We can go down and check them out next week. It'd be nice to have it all in place before my folks come.


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 ERNEST 
Siblings? Did we ask for more than one?


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 CELINE 
We didn't ask them for more, but in a way you were asking for it...


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 ERNEST 
Wait, what? You're pregnant? Pwooow! How mind-blowingly terrific! I wondered what the sudden weight gain was about - now I know we've got about a week to go.


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 CELINE 
Don't tease.


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 CELESTE 
How come no one asked me? This is more than fishy.


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 ERNEST 
I can tease now because soon I won't be able to. In half a year you'll... Argh!


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 CELINE 
What is it?


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 CELESTE 
Daddy?


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 ERNEST 
Aye I eye. It's not that bad. Just sudden and startling. My antiquated cochlear implant is acting up. Only when I get excited and do a certain... Argh!
ERNEST's cochlear implant for his deaf right ear squeaks as the whole side of his face reacts and his right eye winces.


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 CELINE 
So stop, don't do it.


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 ERNEST 
I suppose I can.


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 CELESTE 
No. Stop it.


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 ERNEST 
I mean, I can stop. So - this is so exciting!


The camera slowly pulls back to a wide shot by the end of the scene...


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 CELINE 
Stop and smell the roses. Get back to roots, get grounded, plant yourself. Re-find the refined. Remember what counts. This is another whole new chapter in our adventure together.


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 ERNEST 
Indeed. Re-find the refined. Nice.


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 CELINE 
A vintage store ad.


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 ERNEST 
Remember what counts - to a stats man? Well, you're half refined and you're half refined, and if I'm refined so that makes 2 of us. Not bad. Still need refinement.


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 CELESTE 
Oh, you...


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 CELINE 
No one said you're refined.


Continued in next scene...



Bittersweet Seeds: Gallery: Characters: Act 1A
  Characters: Act 1A Characters: Act 1B Characters: Act 2A Characters: Act 2B Characters: Act 3A Characters: Act 3B  


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All images will be organized in the Bittersweet Seeds: Galleries.

These images will include branding concepts, character designs, final renders, illustrations, prop designs, reference images, sets and settings, sketches, storyboards, unused images, vehicles, visualizations, etc.

An aspect ratio (image) of 2:1, aka Univisium, aka 18:9, keeps widescreen proportions super simple - plus there's a fascinating history, many more technical economies gained, and growing support adopting this newer Univisium format. Many mobile devices feature 2:1 (18:9) screens and it's a new mandatory standard of content platforms like Netflix and Amazon Video - a creative limitation for those who may want alternatives.[2][3][4]


  • Potential notes forthcoming
    alternates / options
    audio / music
    character arcs & choices
    checklists (missing / needed)
    cinematography
    compelling goals / problems
    concepts / research / themes
    development (history)
    directions
  • Screenwriting notes & checklist
    • actively chooses, must have agency, not a victim of the universe
    • flaw, makes issue(s), character arch, realizing and facing change, growing
    • contrast/conflict values/morals
  • What's the PROBLEM at the center of the story and is it compelling?[5]
    P unishing
    R elatable
    O riginal
    B elievable
    L ife-Altering
    E ntertaining
    M eaningful
  • Purpose of a scene should include:[6]
    • Characterization
    • World building
    • Theme
    • Plot
    • Pacing
    • Aesthetic
  • Plot :
    G oal = what
    S takes = why
    U urgency = when
  • Character arc :
    Motivations and Choices
    1. express what the character wants
    2. proactive difficult choice(s) (not passively letting thing happen, given things, etc)
    3. discover what the character actually needs[7]
    Ideally every character in every scene, even if tiny, should have an arc, to be at the end of the scene different from the start.
  • Devices :
    • Show don't tell
    • Reversals - (natural, organic) emotional, character and/or comedic.[8]



 
Bittersweet Seeds Act 1A "Sprout"
Act 1A Introduction Act 1A Scene 0010 Act 1A Scene 0020 Act 1A Scene 0030 Act 1A Scene 0040 Act 1A Scene 0050
Act 1A Scene 0060 Act 1A Scene 0070 Act 1A Scene 0080 Act 1A Scene 0090 Act 1B Scene 0100


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  1. https://disney.fandom.com/wiki/Vanellope_von_Schweetz
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  5. Every Story Is About A PROBLEM - Erik Bork ~ Film Courage, 2018-09-17
  6. Tuca And Bertie Can't Make It Alone ~ Folding Ideas, 2019-12-06 - @1m33s
  7. How To Make Spider-Man Boring - Far From Home ~ The Closer Look, 2019-11-08
  8. Into The Spider-Verse — Greatness Through Reversal | Film Perfection ~ Filmento, 2019-03-08